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xoxfreyaxox
Name : (specify a nickname) IGN : xoxfreyaxox Job : Priest Level : 123 Number of posts : 270 Registration date : 2008-04-21 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sun Aug 03, 2008 8:47 am | |
| :smiley29: is this dead?:smiley50: | |
| | | Bilbo Administrator
Name : Daniel IGN : Bersy Job : Dark Knight Level : 200 Number of posts : 1820 Registration date : 2008-03-20 Mood : pretending to be a Hobbit
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:07 pm | |
| - Hitorihyuuga wrote:
- ...I got nothing. Freak. I got writer's block.
a writer's block at the age of 13.. Gratz! you made it into Guinness XD | |
| | | ManlySuperTaco
Name : Alex, Maude IGN : TeryakHizak, AaronHizaki, LordHizaki, AaronHizakii Job : Bishop, Crusader, Sin, Dawn Warrior Level : 12x, 7x, 4x, 4x Number of posts : 496 Registration date : 2007-08-01 Mood : Hot girls are evil...
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:15 pm | |
| - Bilbo wrote:
- Hitorihyuuga wrote:
- ...I got nothing. Freak. I got writer's block.
a writer's block at the age of 13.. Gratz! you made it into Guinness XD Kevin's actually 11 | |
| | | Bilbo Administrator
Name : Daniel IGN : Bersy Job : Dark Knight Level : 200 Number of posts : 1820 Registration date : 2008-03-20 Mood : pretending to be a Hobbit
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:16 pm | |
| - ManlySuperTaco wrote:
- Kevin's actually 11
are you sure? i heard he's 5 xP | |
| | | ManlySuperTaco
Name : Alex, Maude IGN : TeryakHizak, AaronHizaki, LordHizaki, AaronHizakii Job : Bishop, Crusader, Sin, Dawn Warrior Level : 12x, 7x, 4x, 4x Number of posts : 496 Registration date : 2007-08-01 Mood : Hot girls are evil...
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:39 pm | |
| Don't worry...I know the strange kid in rl...I know all... | |
| | | xoxfreyaxox
Name : (specify a nickname) IGN : xoxfreyaxox Job : Priest Level : 123 Number of posts : 270 Registration date : 2008-04-21 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sun Aug 03, 2008 2:58 pm | |
| omg for an 11 year old he's good! my compliments to you man!!! | |
| | | Hitorihyuuga
Name : (specify a nickname) Job : Archer Level : 26 Number of posts : 166 Registration date : 2007-08-15
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:02 am | |
| ...Alex...remember that time, a couple years ago, when I told you to never divulge my personal information on the Internet? And then you completely ignored me and told everyone my name was Kevin? And when I found out I grabbed you by the scruff of your neck, and began yelling out you for being a complete idiot? I think my exact words were, "ALEX, YOU IDIOT! I'M GONNA BEEPING KILL YOU FOR BEEPING GIVING OUT MY BEEPING REAL NAME! WHY THE BEEP DID YOU DO THAT?!" and I actually used "beep" as a swear word? Remember? You should realize by now after *classified* years of friendship, that I tend to censor things out by paranoia. So I'm going to censor you...permanently.
What kind of threat is that? "I'm going to censor you...permanently."? The only thing lamer than that is like... "I'm doing this because I kneed the dough"- Larry the Baker. And by the way, I still have writer's block. | |
| | | ManlySuperTaco
Name : Alex, Maude IGN : TeryakHizak, AaronHizaki, LordHizaki, AaronHizakii Job : Bishop, Crusader, Sin, Dawn Warrior Level : 12x, 7x, 4x, 4x Number of posts : 496 Registration date : 2007-08-01 Mood : Hot girls are evil...
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:22 am | |
| Don't you remember that it was KEVIN who put up the post on your birthday saying you were actually turing 11 not 13! It's not all MY fault! | |
| | | Hitorihyuuga
Name : (specify a nickname) Job : Archer Level : 26 Number of posts : 166 Registration date : 2007-08-15
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:40 am | |
| What are you talking about, I never said I was turning eleven! | |
| | | ManlySuperTaco
Name : Alex, Maude IGN : TeryakHizak, AaronHizaki, LordHizaki, AaronHizakii Job : Bishop, Crusader, Sin, Dawn Warrior Level : 12x, 7x, 4x, 4x Number of posts : 496 Registration date : 2007-08-01 Mood : Hot girls are evil...
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:04 am | |
| Stop acting stupid kevin >.> THE OTHER Kevin. | |
| | | Hitorihyuuga
Name : (specify a nickname) Job : Archer Level : 26 Number of posts : 166 Registration date : 2007-08-15
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:52 pm | |
| With school starting, I suppose fanfiction is going to die again, at least for me. | |
| | | Hitorihyuuga
Name : (specify a nickname) Job : Archer Level : 26 Number of posts : 166 Registration date : 2007-08-15
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sat Dec 06, 2008 4:40 pm | |
| Suddenly, time began to flow again. The guillotine came whooshing down, and the crowd gasped and winced as something broke. But it wasn't Nathan's neck- it was the sharp blade, crafted of the finest and strongest steel, shattering to pieces upon his neck. Hair tangled and eyes glowing with the light of the power he now embraced, Nathan bared his teeth at the crowd. "SHARENIA!!!", Nathan cried, the name ripping from his throat and the ground trembling with his anger. The guillotine containing him literally exploded, and the earth shuddered with Nathan's might. The government officials of Sharenia were ripped from their stately palaces, entombed by layers of rock and stone. They gathered in these earthen coffins above Nathan, and began to spin, rotating around each other at high speeds. "Greed! Malice! For those reasons you wipe out the guardians of Bellocan in the name of something holy and right!" Nathan roared, his contract filling him with new knowledge, "So that you could find the Origin Crystals? So that you could have power over all? Is this why you killed my friend? Answer me! ANSWER ME!". Moans and whines came out of the tombs circling overhead, but there tones conveyed their meaning. "Lies! LIES! You wished for dominion over man, over sentience, and slaughtered mercilessly to get it! And for that, you will not even be allowed the honor of death! You shall destroy the abomination you have created! Become...Ergoth, destroyer of empires!" Nathan shouted, and the tombs began to speed towards each other. The official's desperate pleas became hysterical, driven on by a fear of something worse than death. The stone warped, twisted, and took on recognizable shape, the tortured faces of the officials sometimes poking out to cry in agony and despair. Then, the stone casing fell away to reveal the true demon, a ghastly apparation with tattered velvet robes and skeletal structure, with flaming eyes that burned with hatred at the world, at the universe, at existence itself. "Die...SHARENIA!"
Well...how did it go? Pretty impressive, considering my writing skills have lain dormant for the past...three months. | |
| | | xoxfreyaxox
Name : (specify a nickname) IGN : xoxfreyaxox Job : Priest Level : 123 Number of posts : 270 Registration date : 2008-04-21 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:06 pm | |
| Oh wow... now what? i don’t know... hmm lets see.
- Spoiler:
Katsuzie just stared at the motionless wizards in front of her. She started to shake and her internally. Her knees were too weak that she felt she was going to drop on the ground and cry. She shouldn’t remember. She doesn’t want to remember. She shook her head wildly, You can be strong Katsuzie...you have to be.
Grendel patted her shoulders, "We got it from here Katsuzie, you can go." he whispered in her ears. His voice was hypnotizing that she immediately followed what her teacher instructed her to do. She even forgot that she left her daughter behind with a confused look on her face. She knows now that she has to tell Freya everything—everything about the protectors of Bellocan, Freya’s father, and the Mark on her hand that she kept from her daughter just because she doesn’t want to relive anything that happened during her pregnancy. She even had to hide her daughter’s true age.
She just started walking with her head down, ignoring people’s gasps and talks about what just had happen. And then when she looked up, which she regretted to much. She saw the child Marie crying to her mother when they found out about her father being taken the evil demon. To this she absent mindedly touched her belly, as memories started to flow by…
“We can just run Tom, why can’t we just go.” Katsuzie begged as she saw the love of her life walk out the door ready to fight the demon threatening Bellocan. She grabbed his arm and tried to pull him to her to kiss him.
He slowly pulled away, he dropped his Stone tooth sword to be able hug her tightly. “Katsuzie love, I can’t just let them fight with out me. I’m the captain of the Heroes. They need me there to lead the attack.”
She shook her head and held on him tighter, so he would leave. “That’s not true. You don’t have to be there, Bilbo said he can lead the team for you. Hell, even though he’s a DarkKnight.” She cried on his chest. “He said he’ll lead it for you. Please don’t go.” She begged him some more and sobbed on his chest.
He sighed, he took leaned forward and kissed on top of her head. “Kat, I have to go…” he pulled away from her and he took her face with both his hands. “They are relying on me to keep hope for them. This war is for our freedom. Freedom from this evil rule, for us to live a better life for our family… for everyone.” He rested his forehead on hers.
“I know that, but…” she took one of his hands and rested it on her belly, “But I’m going to go crazy if you leave. We need you.” She looked at deep into his eyes.
He widen his eyes in surprise, “We?” he whispered, he looked at his hands on her belly and felt his face tear up.
“Yes, that’s why you have to stay…”
He fell on his knees and looked at her belly. He was staring at her stomach hoping that the baby inside her belly would hear him, “You are going to be so loved, I am going to make sure that you’re going to live a life that’s not dangerous.” He kissed her belly.
She shook her head again, “No! No!” she understood what he’s saying now, he’s even more dedicated to leave, to be able to fight for a stronger reason. She fell on her knees too, she took his face and made him look into her eyes, “Please don’t go,” she begged again.
He just smiled, he leaned down and kissed her forehead. “Please don’t make this harder than it already is.” He whispered. He looked deep into her blue eyes, “I promise you I will come back…I promise to return to you…” he took her hand and kissed softly on her Aeons mark. “I promise you that as your husband and as An Aeons warrior.” He added with a strong conviction on his tone and he placed his hand on his chest, his Aeons mark on his hand glowed dark blue.
All she did was just nod, she knows that when an Aeons mark would glow… that seals the deal. The deal that he’s coming back to her. She took his face and kissed him passionately.
With one more look, he kissed her belly and then took his Stone Tooth Sword to leave ready for the war that would determine the freedom of Bellocan.
That was the last time she saw him. That was the day when he broke his promise to her. Katsuzie laid on her bed trying to stop the tears that is flowing from her eyes. Laeigh had took him away from her, TomLuther’s warriors were one of the unfortunate ones who got attacked by Laeigh himself. With in the hundreds of Heroes that was on that army only one barely survived… he survived long enough to tell everyone what had happened to them.
And from day on, Katzusie’s heart had stopped beating. She may be alive, but she just felt like a ghost just drifting apart… the only person that kept her going was the proof of Tom and hers love that was growing in her belly.
alright… I hope you like this… lol! I know I know… but I was just curious how long Laeigh was stuck in that prison of his. Alright…. Hehe… Yay… | |
| | | Hitorihyuuga
Name : (specify a nickname) Job : Archer Level : 26 Number of posts : 166 Registration date : 2007-08-15
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:24 pm | |
| Alright, now that all the flashbacks are over, let the real story begin...
Nathan stood stock still as clerics and priests tried to unweave, with great difficulties, the spells that had been cast on the mages, frozen in the past. Grendel ran forward, the calm composure he had shown to Katsuzie replaced by a flustered panic. “Nathan! What happened? Where is Laeigh?”. Nathan gave Grendel one long look, then hid his face beneath his hat and turned away. “Silent! What are you doing?”, Grendel called. Nathan looked back at Grendel, and then sighed regretfully. Raising his arms, two walls of stone encased him within, and then shrank back into the ground. Nothing was left but a badger-sized burrow and a stone, no bigger than a pebble, with something inscribed upon it. Grendel summoned it to him, and took a good long look.
“A spiral? That’s it? Nothing more? Not even a magic spiral, or anything?”, Spike exclaimed. The small group passed around the one clue Nathan had given them, and once Ba Gua saw it, he looked especially worried. “What? Does it mean something to…to the spirits?”, Grendel inquired. “Well…it should mean something to all of you, and I’m starting to worry about that. It is the universal symbol of the Origin, the theoretical beginning and ending of existence.”. “Go on…”. “I’m guessing, and I really wish I’m wrong, that The Silent is trying to tell us something about the Origin Crystals, the fabled essences that, when combined, could grant dominion over everything is now, will be, and once was. It was with these powers that Laeigh became the monster he is now; it was with these powers that he was sealed away by Dalris and four other Aeons members.”. “So you’re saying,” Hitori concluded, “That The Silent wants us to find and use these…Origin Crystals?”. Ba Gua laughed, a defeated sort of half chuckle. “That’s easier than it sounds. No single person knows the location of all five Origin Crystals, and the only people who knew the location of at least one were the ones who sealed Laeigh away. And they all died a long time ago.”. The group stood in somber silence, and then Hitori hesitantly spoke up. “Well, consider this- Kastallia came down from heaven to…uh, instruct me to get Laeigh back. And if she came down one way, she can go up the same way, and I think you know where I’m getting with this…”
By the by, I frankly have no idea how long Laeigh was stuck in that prison of his- since the original Aeons existed, that's for sure. I originally intended this to be set a couple hundred years after the last original Aeons member died (original being before the sealing of Laeigh), but I think we decided on something a little more recent. | |
| | | Hitorihyuuga
Name : (specify a nickname) Job : Archer Level : 26 Number of posts : 166 Registration date : 2007-08-15
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Mon Jan 19, 2009 7:46 pm | |
| It died already?! After three posts?! What the heck?! | |
| | | xoxfreyaxox
Name : (specify a nickname) IGN : xoxfreyaxox Job : Priest Level : 123 Number of posts : 270 Registration date : 2008-04-21 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Recovery Story (The Untitled Story) Mon Apr 27, 2009 3:08 pm | |
| Well... i dont really know what to do with it now! its just far too scary! | |
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