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 |  Subject: Rain  Tue Jun 24, 2008 5:49 pm | |
| This is one of the few short stories i write... hope you like it. :)
- Spoiler:
"Wait.. don't go.." he asked softly as she was about to turn her back on him.
"Give me a reason not to.." She replied calmly, she just stared at his bright blue eyes. When he didn't say anything she just smiled and turned her back on him..
"Because I love you.." he said as he reached for her arm, "Don't you...?"
The question felt as if her heart was stabbed by a sword and then ripped
apart, she just swallowed her tears and shoved his hand away. She turned around, looking at him, trying to remain as calm as she could since deep inside she was shaking and heartbroken. "I'd be lying if i told you i dont..." she whispered.
"Then why are we doing this? We can still be together.." he insisted as he
tried to touch her face, but she looked away. So he just closed his fist
as if he was catching air in it.
"Because I do not trust you..." she sighed and wiped the tear that fell from her eye. She just stared at the puddle of rain by the road, then looked at him again. "Sooner or later... i'd fall out of love."
"But-"
"I loved you so much, that I became blind to everything... I didn't even
believe my bestfriend when she told me about it.... You cheated on me.." As she said that tears started to flow down her face, she imediately wiped them away and she gave him a smile. "I loved you, and now...I'm letting you go..."
She looked at him for a second before she turned her back on him and started to walk away. She didn't even bother to open her umbrella; the cold rain started to soak her, as if the rain was her only comfort. She just hugged herself. That moment she felt as if she was happy because she can love herself more. She isn't really giving up on love, or telling herself that she will not love again, but she is just giving herself sometime to heal and to learn to love herself more. For now, all she had to feel was the cold rain on her body giving her comfort.
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| | Subject: Re: Rain Tue Jun 24, 2008 8:28 pm | |
| That's nice Leah~
"Comfort" such a wonderful word... |
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Loveable Kaze
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| | Subject: Re: Rain Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:34 pm | |
| - Loveable Kaze wrote:
Oddly familiar... unless u read Lizzie McGuire fanfics then thats where you read that... | |
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Loveable Kaze
Name : David
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Level : up! =D
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Registration date : 2007-06-19
Mood : Speechless!
| | Subject: Re: Rain Wed Jun 25, 2008 9:53 pm | |
| Actually...no..I've lived that... | |
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xoxfreyaxox
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| | Subject: Re: Rain Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:07 pm | |
| awww.. thats sad.  | |
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